The Red Eyes
By Tamira
Some people swore that the house was haunted.
“OH, MAN!” I said, while I was throwing my dog’s ball over the great big gates of the house.
It was the 31st of October 1940. I needed to get the ball, so I slowly walked inside the gate. The door creaked behind me as I closed it. I walked slowly to the huge house. I opened the door and walked inside. The first thing I saw was a skull with blood marks on it.
Then, I went more closely to the skull and in the blood marks it said: “LOOK BEHIND YOU!!!!!!”
I turned around and saw a red-eyed vampire sucking all the blood out of my dog. I stared. I couldn’t believe it. I started boiling inside. I couldn’t stand the sight of seeing my dead dog.
My eyes started turning red and I got these fangs and I sucked out the blood of the vampire. When I finished, I flew until I reached my spooky coffin.
From that day on, nothing was the same again.
Comments (1)
5gtamira said
at 5:28 pm on Nov 17, 2010
SWo,do you like my story PEOPLE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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